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Allow me to exaggerate a memory or two by Proserpiine Allow me to exaggerate a memory or two by Proserpiine
Allow me to exaggerate a memory or two
Where summers lasted longer than, longer than we do
When nothing really mattered except for me to be with you
But in time we all forgot and we all grew

This is piece I've had in mind and been wanting to draw for some time! It's one of my fondest memories haha
Literally you could sum up my life by listening to Pretty Odd, that album fits me so well and I love it


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Critique by Belgian-Cookie Belgian-Cookie/critique/1479465796">Jan 29, 2017, 10:36:46 AM
*Coughs* this is too beautiful for me to critique but like-

idk
uh so lets get started on the things love
i love the BG like the grass and the textured brush, bee's eye is amazing eeK

i love the painted look as well!!

however, the legs looks a little off on the golden dog (idk her name oops)
the arms may be a little too long? Id say overall the anatomy could be better?
But the overall drawing is amazing eek
i love the look of the running motion? (like how bee is kind of smudged because the effect of running aaa)
What do you think?
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Critique by DreampeIt DreampeIt/critique/1479466918">Jan 29, 2017, 10:41:08 AM
hello!
time for another critique ^^

so, this piece of s o nice.

I love the birds in the back. The grass is really good, the grass overlapping makes it look real.
The clouds and sun is very nice, and the trees aren't bad either.

I have a weird thing with yellow one's arms ;o; they look a bit too long to me. That might just be me but whatever. I also feel like Rocky's ear, that's infront of the other ear, shouldn't have much light on it? But I dunno.

I actually see a sort of 3d effect, and it makes it look VERY cute.
I love this a lot, and you did a really good job on it! Probably one of your best pieces.
What do you think?
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Froot36jooce Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2017  Student General Artist
bons parents maybe? looks like it lol
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:iconproserpiine:
Proserpiine Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
nah thats bee (me) in the front and someone i know in the back
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:iconfroot36jooce:
Froot36jooce Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2017  Student General Artist
Oh x3
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raichufan98765 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2017  Student Photographer
Me: 'sniffling' 

Friend: you OK?

Me: yeah i just got something in my eye.

Me: that was a beautiful poem & amazing drawing.
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MajesticBandicoot Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
whos the yellow one
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:iconproserpiine:
Proserpiine Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
someone who meant a lot to me irl
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:iconraichufan98765:
raichufan98765 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2017  Student Photographer
who was or is that someone?
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:iconzapdiamond:
Zapdiamond Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2017  Student Digital Artist
So cute!
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:icontrailing-feathers:
Trailing-Feathers Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2017  Student General Artist
ERH ME GOSH THIS IS AWESOME
LOVE THE PERSPECTIVE AND MOVEMENT

THE COLORS AND DETAIL LOOK GREAT AA
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:iconlambiii:
Lambiii Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
P R E E T Y O D D 
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:iconproserpiine:
Proserpiine Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Y E A H B O I
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:iconlambiii:
Lambiii Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
PFFT VICES AND VIRTUES IS MY FAV
but pretty odd's
okay
I feel the same
but things have changed
since then 
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:iconwafflepawss:
wafflepawss Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2017
aaaAAAA THIS IS SO CUTE EEE
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:iconproserpiine:
Proserpiine Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks so much!!!
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:iconwafflepawss:
wafflepawss Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2017
no prob!!
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:icondreampeit:
DreampeIt Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this is so nice !
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:iconproserpiine:
Proserpiine Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you!!
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:iconbelgian-cookie:
Belgian-Cookie Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OMG THIS IS SO CUTE AND GOOD


AAAA this is amazing eek
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:iconproserpiine:
Proserpiine Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks so much! <3
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:iconbelgian-cookie:
Belgian-Cookie Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
-goes to critique but I'm kind of scared
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